great story board!
Look great man! very well drawn and great FX...
keep up the good work!
Thanks for the review man
Hey man, great first flash!
This was good, had a good start with great music. What was the song BTW?
Anyways, to make it better use FX and sounds to give the flash its feel.
tis iz so EZ!!
OMG all o my 5s r belng to dis! dis iz da best tutoral eva! i can tly becme fames!
omg wow ty lol
but you should have like a star score, like 5 stars is like 95% sort of like guitar and fretsonfire. Fretsonfire is the keyboard version of guitar hero. Look into it and maybe you'll get some ideas
glad ya liked the idea. like I say, I'm gonna get myself a proffessional scripter to work with me on this one :S
It's not terrible, it's okay. there's a trick though, if you hold the up button, you keep jumping. You dont stop, you just keep going, so i just jumped over all the spikes and blades in one just and just fell ontop of the flag.
Okay job, i understand this is just a test.
sorry, but still a test
Hey man a real solid composition you got here! I just have some constructive criticism for you, i hope you dont mind.
Right now I feel the song is a little empty. Yes you have wonderful composition, rich piano, but all your frequencies/synths/hi-hats seem to be in the higher end with only your kick and piano dwelling in the lower end. Where's the bass/fx? It just sounds a little unbalanced in my opinion. Another tip is that you can change up your drum loop every 8/16 bars or something to give it a little variety.
This is my opinion though! You've got talent that's for sure. The mixing sounded great, composition all made sense, it just felt a little empty to me.
Hope you didnt take offense to this, just try to help a fellow artist out!
Keep it up, have a good one
Hey man, no offense taken, I love constructive criticism, helps me to get better!
I'll taken everything you said on board, clearly from other reviews I need to work on bass ends a lot more. Thanks though for taking the time to listen and review :D
Really like the beginning but it overall doesn't feel full enough!
Put a small reverb/delay on the intro arppegio to give it some room.
Liking the big chords though but I think they might be a bit too loud! Would also love to see a bass added in here to beef it up! Overall solid work, i know it's still a work in progress but it's still got some ways to go! Keep at it!
Thanks for the review! I'll keep your suggestions in mind. ^^
definietly not worth the score it has...
hey man! I'm really like this song! Love the sytrus present 'growl' and you used it so melodically!
One suggestion i have is that you have no FX! No crashes or sweeps! if you add those in they will really fill up your song.. for example, the transition at 1:59 is really abrupt and there isnt anything there that leads me into the next stage of the song.. a sweep or a wind FX would work wonders there.
Overall great track, this song really speaks volumes about your musical development... Your starting to get the hang of it ;)
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Thanks a lot for your feedback. And your advice is noted! All I need to do is find the sweeps, unless sweep is just the term for an inverted crash...lolll
Funny how you specificaly indentified the synth I used :P
in any case, your feedback is mucho mucho appreciated, thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks!
Veryy psychedelic!! im loving in!!
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