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The first minute was bearable, but after that...It turned into kinda of dragged on sort of thing... Try to add in some more melody, make it less distorted
Keep trying!!
Dj-UnKnOwN
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This is song really pumpin'! I would love to hear an extended version though. The only bad thing is that it is really repeatitive. at 1:10 you have a break, but then it just comes back in with the same beat.
Awesome job on the song, but it's just a bit repeatitive.
Dj-UnKnOwN
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Very nice use of sounds, but it's really super repetitive, it's an awesome beat i love it. But you need to mix it up a bit. I would love to hear the finished version.
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Dj-UnKnOwN
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I was groovin' to this song since i first heard, really reminded me of Daft Punk's Aerodynamic, or Around the world. But yea, the kick was a little overpowering. Try EQing it or just generally lowering it, but other then that, awesome job on this track
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Dj-UnKnOwN
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Okay, 4 things....
1: the kicks were way to basic, try putting a techno pounder into the master mixer track of the kick and fooling around with the controls
2: the drums were a bit basic just a kick and the closed hi-hats
3: you need to have a lead synth, not just an arp, i'm assuming your using FL studio, try using a platnium saw in Sytrus
4: It was really repetive, and i saw that you tried to mix up the melody, but i didnt really flow well.
Voted 3/5 Nice try
Dj-UnKnOwN Check out my stuff to get the idea of making music, or even PM me i'll be glad to help you with the basics =)
Author's Response:
yeah, i am pretty new to fl, i only have the express version, and the kick is basic because its the default, with the drums i basically got bored and just gave up, i can't use sytrus, because i only have it as a demo. thanks i will pm you
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We never got a chance to add in sweet drumz =( Damn power outages =\ you better buy the full version... I might kill you if you don't......O_O
Author's Response:
hahah yea yea.......i jusyt got back from a week of soccerrrr lol, yea ill get it
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Nice job on your second song! And yes, this is your best song to date. But the song was lacking precussion... the only drum beat that was in the song was in the beginning! Other than that, the song was really erm... "groovy" a very catchy melody, and well organized, just need to add precussion, and work on making your beatz all flow together well, something sounds sound off-beat. Also, i was really digging the ending, it ended abruptly.
Voted 5/5 and 10/10
Awesome work on your second song, keep it up!
Thanks for your vote, Dj-UnKnOwN! You voted 5 for {United Fire}, raising its score from 4.00 to 4.25.
Dj UnKnOwN
Author's Response:
Thanks alot, you'll have to come over to touch it up lol
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Great song! very catch, i like the arp in the beginning, but where does it go? It abruptly stops! Great use of drums, distorted at sometimes, hence my clarity score, the melody didnt change a lot, not at all if anything, but this is your first song, so this is an awesome song! Has The Cynic Project feel.
10/10 and 5/5
Thanks for your vote, Dj-UnKnOwN! You voted 5 for Gears Of Silence, keeping its score at 5.00.
Author's Response:
Thanks So Much! You'll Se More Music Later.
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Great job on your first song! Some of the notes did sound off key. And it doesn't really have any structure, like i was telling you before, it needs to flow well, and some parts flow really well, but the transitioning isnt so great. But great use of sounds, i liked the distortion, this song has a lot of potential, and if you work on it a little while longer, i'm sure something awesome will come of it =)
Voted 4
Thanks for your vote, Dj-UnKnOwN! You voted 4 for Take You Away, raising its score from 3.00 to 3.33.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Im working on it...soon enough the new version will be up
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I think this song could've done without the claps, it kinda took away the feeling of 'insects' it was also super repetitive. This song overall, was ok . But what i did like was the random tempo changes.
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