great story board!

Look great man! very well drawn and great FX...
keep up the good work!

Good job

Hey man, great first flash!
This was good, had a good start with great music. What was the song BTW?
Anyways, to make it better use FX and sounds to give the flash its feel.
Good job
Dj-Unknown

tis iz so EZ!!

OMG all o my 5s r belng to dis! dis iz da best tutoral eva! i can tly becme fames!

Hey man a real solid composition you got here! I just have some constructive criticism for you, i hope you dont mind.

Right now I feel the song is a little empty. Yes you have wonderful composition, rich piano, but all your frequencies/synths/hi-hats seem to be in the higher end with only your kick and piano dwelling in the lower end. Where's the bass/fx? It just sounds a little unbalanced in my opinion. Another tip is that you can change up your drum loop every 8/16 bars or something to give it a little variety.

This is my opinion though! You've got talent that's for sure. The mixing sounded great, composition all made sense, it just felt a little empty to me.

Hope you didnt take offense to this, just try to help a fellow artist out!
Keep it up, have a good one

Really like the beginning but it overall doesn't feel full enough!

Put a small reverb/delay on the intro arppegio to give it some room.

Liking the big chords though but I think they might be a bit too loud! Would also love to see a bass added in here to beef it up! Overall solid work, i know it's still a work in progress but it's still got some ways to go! Keep at it!

definietly not worth the score it has...

hey man! I'm really like this song! Love the sytrus present 'growl' and you used it so melodically!

One suggestion i have is that you have no FX! No crashes or sweeps! if you add those in they will really fill up your song.. for example, the transition at 1:59 is really abrupt and there isnt anything there that leads me into the next stage of the song.. a sweep or a wind FX would work wonders there.

Overall great track, this song really speaks volumes about your musical development... Your starting to get the hang of it ;)
9/10
5/5

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Veryy psychedelic!! im loving in!!