Dj-UnKnOwN's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(Illusions)]

Eh...

Wasnt my favorite out of all of your other tracks. A bit to ambient for me, very repeatitive. It's cool how it loops at the end. The snares were too strong, too much of a punch. Not one of my favorites out of your other songs.
3/5
Dj-Unknown

[!Touch The Sky!]

Well done

This song was amazing! Had that flying feeling, I fell in love with the arp. You could've fixxed up with bass in the backround, it didnt really fit well with the rest of the song, IMO.
4/5
Dj-UnKnOwN

[Epic Fantasy]

Going on my ipod!

Very interesting song, one of my favorite genres is electro trance. This song nailed it, the only flaw in this song was that it kind of dragged on, it could've been a tad shorter, but other then that, this song was awesome! Definatly going onto my Ipod!
5/5!
Dj-UnKnOwN

[Holy Paradise]

eh...

A few flaws with this song

1. The kicks were a tad bit too basic, to make them more unique, open up the master mixer, assign your kick to a channel, then put a techno pounder over it, play around with those until you get the desired sound.
2. The drums were a bit too repeatitive, and too basic, try switching them up a bit.
3. The melody, was overall too simple, a repeated through out the whole song, but
4. haha Claps dont go with every song/melody.

Granted i did see effort put into this so i'm giving you a 4/5
Pm me for some help on the basics if you need

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Dj-UnKnOwN

scorpinox responds:

Thanks a lot! I will keep these list of flaws in mind, for they will help me on my next song. To be honest though, I kinda felt lazy when making this one. I only have a demo of FL Studio, so when I make a song, I must make haste with completing it before some bastard in my house closes the program. Very aggrivating. I'll check to see what you got. Again, thanks for the tips!

[Iron Echoes]

Great song....

This song is really good, i but i think in the beginning, the strings came on a bit too strong. Also, try to switch up your drums a bit.

Other than that, great song, voted 4/5!
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Dj-UnKnOwN

Kid2Will responds:

Yep i don't think the drums change, cept for the break, i need someone else to do my drums lolol.

[Shotgun Vasectomy]

yea...okay...umm

The first minute was bearable, but after that...It turned into kinda of dragged on sort of thing... Try to add in some more melody, make it less distorted

Keep trying!!
Dj-UnKnOwN

[OMG porno porn]

Great beat goin'

This is song really pumpin'! I would love to hear an extended version though. The only bad thing is that it is really repeatitive. at 1:10 you have a break, but then it just comes back in with the same beat.

Awesome job on the song, but it's just a bit repeatitive.
Dj-UnKnOwN

[Happy Hysteria (v.0.5)]

Great song

Very nice use of sounds, but it's really super repetitive, it's an awesome beat i love it. But you need to mix it up a bit. I would love to hear the finished version.

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Dj-UnKnOwN

[Space Man]

Got a pretty rockin song goin here...

I was groovin' to this song since i first heard, really reminded me of Daft Punk's Aerodynamic, or Around the world. But yea, the kick was a little overpowering. Try EQing it or just generally lowering it, but other then that, awesome job on this track
4/5
8/10
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Dj-UnKnOwN

[basic techno]

Hmm...

Okay, 4 things....

1: the kicks were way to basic, try putting a techno pounder into the master mixer track of the kick and fooling around with the controls
2: the drums were a bit basic just a kick and the closed hi-hats
3: you need to have a lead synth, not just an arp, i'm assuming your using FL studio, try using a platnium saw in Sytrus
4: It was really repetive, and i saw that you tried to mix up the melody, but i didnt really flow well.
Voted 3/5 Nice try

Dj-UnKnOwN Check out my stuff to get the idea of making music, or even PM me i'll be glad to help you with the basics =)

koopaclock responds:

yeah, i am pretty new to fl, i only have the express version, and the kick is basic because its the default, with the drums i basically got bored and just gave up, i can't use sytrus, because i only have it as a demo. thanks i will pm you