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Hey...

the beginning was good, started off with a bang! i liked the arp a lot at 1:15. I think the synth you used at 4:07 was a little too high pitched. Everything else was put together very well. Alot of diversity which was good. But some things seemed a bit forced. Like you had no more ideas so you put some random things in. haha only your second song but VERY VERY good, you got lots of potential man, i really look foward to your new songs.

8/10 4/5

Dj-Unknown (check out my new song Shock the system)

namoroso responds:

This was actually one of the first songs I made with my buddy DJ Stain. Probably one of our strongest songs. Thanks for the review!

[.Darktone.]

ehhhh it's ok..

Ehhh, sorry to say but this song is not as good as your song Fantasy island. The kicks did not fit in the least bit, over-powered the synth. The pad was nice, and the 'dark synth' could've been louder. And the ending could've been a lot better.
Overall ok job, but could've been improved. 3/5 7/10

Mr-Carrothead responds:

Okay thanks, maybe I should've spent more time on this

[Galactic Dance Club]

Nice song

haha is that the Atez present i hear in the beginning and the backround? Hahaha. Anyway, great job, and yes i was/am totally dancing to this song as i write this review. Awesome job
Check out my new song Happiness
Dj-Unknown

Twistedtechnology responds:

sweet, im glad i got you to dance XD Im not exaclty sure which arp i was using for this specific song ^^; but im glad you like the song nonetheless XD I'll check your stuff out asap!

~Twistedtechnology

[Dying Soul (Part II)]

=( =( =(

Hmmm... I liked part one a lot more. Everything in this song is trying to overpower the other. The pad did overpower the most though. I also didnt like the arp, try not to use that in all of your songs. But what i did like was the whining sound in the backround, sounded like a voice. Overall, ok song but not the best, also needed major volume tuning.
3/5, sorry but your other version was better!
Check out my new song happiness
Dj-Unknown

scorpinox responds:

Thanks. I knew the sudden change of this song would be its downfall. Oh well. Better luck next time.

[Dying Soul (Part I)]

Wonderful job

Oh man 'm loving the beginning, i see you took my advice, and played with the kick filters, it flowed very well! But i think the vox ACTIVATE runined the mood. It was very calming almost ambient, then you hear that vocal it's like.. Wtf? haha. at 1:11, what instrument is that? It's very calming. you shoul've lowered the volume down just a bit, so you can have a more serene effect
I see LOTS of improvement and wonderful job 10/10 5/5!!
Check out my new song happiness
Dj-Unknown

scorpinox responds:

Thanks a bunch! I used the Happy Tune instument at 1:11. Hopefully I keep getting better!

[Holy Paradise]

eh...

A few flaws with this song

1. The kicks were a tad bit too basic, to make them more unique, open up the master mixer, assign your kick to a channel, then put a techno pounder over it, play around with those until you get the desired sound.
2. The drums were a bit too repeatitive, and too basic, try switching them up a bit.
3. The melody, was overall too simple, a repeated through out the whole song, but
4. haha Claps dont go with every song/melody.

Granted i did see effort put into this so i'm giving you a 4/5
Pm me for some help on the basics if you need

Check out my stuff some time
Dj-UnKnOwN

scorpinox responds:

Thanks a lot! I will keep these list of flaws in mind, for they will help me on my next song. To be honest though, I kinda felt lazy when making this one. I only have a demo of FL Studio, so when I make a song, I must make haste with completing it before some bastard in my house closes the program. Very aggrivating. I'll check to see what you got. Again, thanks for the tips!

[Iron Echoes]

Great song....

This song is really good, i but i think in the beginning, the strings came on a bit too strong. Also, try to switch up your drums a bit.

Other than that, great song, voted 4/5!
Check out my songs
Dj-UnKnOwN

Kid2Will responds:

Yep i don't think the drums change, cept for the break, i need someone else to do my drums lolol.

[basic techno]

Hmm...

Okay, 4 things....

1: the kicks were way to basic, try putting a techno pounder into the master mixer track of the kick and fooling around with the controls
2: the drums were a bit basic just a kick and the closed hi-hats
3: you need to have a lead synth, not just an arp, i'm assuming your using FL studio, try using a platnium saw in Sytrus
4: It was really repetive, and i saw that you tried to mix up the melody, but i didnt really flow well.
Voted 3/5 Nice try

Dj-UnKnOwN Check out my stuff to get the idea of making music, or even PM me i'll be glad to help you with the basics =)

koopaclock responds:

yeah, i am pretty new to fl, i only have the express version, and the kick is basic because its the default, with the drums i basically got bored and just gave up, i can't use sytrus, because i only have it as a demo. thanks i will pm you

[Light Rage]

UGH!

We never got a chance to add in sweet drumz =( Damn power outages =\ you better buy the full version... I might kill you if you don't......O_O

dJViZ responds:

hahah yea yea.......i jusyt got back from a week of soccerrrr lol, yea ill get it